Parks’ Triad

Triad meaning three for which I have found 2 different forms of verse called a Triad. 
• The Triad is a genre from ancient Irish Verse rather than a verse form although the early examples are in 3 mono-rhymed triplets. Like the Treochair it is a departure from the quatrains of Dan Direach. More modern versions allow the structure to be at the poet’s discretion. Most importantly, the poem should include 3 related subjects and their character. 

The early Triad is:
○ a poem that lists 3 related things and considers their effects.
○ written in 3 mono-rhymed triplets. Meter is at the discretion of the poet.
○ is written with modern interpretations of this form which vary from free verse, a loose poetic form written in 3 couplets rhymed or unrhymed, or in nonce frames created specifically for the poem.
○ most importantly written including 3 related subjects, their character and relationship.

Uniquely Irish, The Shamrock by Judi Van Gorder 

I don’t mean to be terse 
It could be much much worse 
but I’ll try to write a clever verse.

Of shamrock’s I will carp, 
may sound a bit too sharp 
not like sweet music on the harp. 

In distant Ireland of all places 
they cover most of the bases 
even the art of shaving faces.

Seamrog, (Gaelic) shamrock, with its 3 leaves is said to represent not only the Holy Trinity, but also (the fruits of the spirit, faith, hope and charity), (love, valor and wit), (past, present and future) and uniquely Irish, (clever verse, music on the harp, and the art of shaving faces).

• A variation of the Triad was published in Pathways for the Poet by Viola Berg 1977 and is attributed to Rena Ferguson Parks. It is a metered, rhymed invented form with a refrain.

The invented variation of the Triad is:
○ a poem in 22 lines made up of an octave, sixain and an octave in that order.
○ metric, all lines are iambic tetrameter accept the last line of each stanza which is a refrain in iambic dimeter.
○ rhymed, turned on only 2 rhymes, rhyme scheme xxxaxabA xxxabA xxxaxabA – b rhyme linking the stanzas and A being the refrain.

Pasted from http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1164
My thanks to Judi Van Gorder for years of work on this fine PMO resource.

I have chosen for expediency to differentiate, by tagging the second version with the name “Park’s Triad”.

My example

They’re Out of Names (Parks’ Triad)

Last week I found another life;
it’s on the Internet, you know.
If you are not already there
you must be tied up playing games,
or busy earning daily bread,
or optimistic, chasing dames.
you ought to join this word- before
they’re out of names.

I could not use a name I knew;
I tried a few and many more,
then many others after those.
“That name is taken”- screen proclaims.
I can’t be Larry anymore,
they’re out of names.

I teleport, and I can fly,
and be a woman, or a man
or be a robot or a beast,
but I cannot be John or James.
I can now choose to wander free
or be one with more lofty aims.
So join up now, and don’t be sore;
they’re out of names.

© Lawrencealot – February 4, 2015

 

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