Tree of Life

  • Tree of Life is an invented verse form written in the shape of a tree. Found at Poetry Styles and created by Christina Jusaumme who requests the subject of the poem be uplifting.
    The Tree of Life is:

    • a poem in 19 lines.
    • syllabic, 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10-11-12-13-4-4-4-4-4-4.
    • unrhymed.
    • centered on the page.

My Thanks to Christina R Jussaume for her work on PoetryStyles site.


My example


Be Deciduous (Tree of Life)



that falls

on barren

limbs still may break

those boughs. None-the-less

the trees prepare themselves

by shedding platforms to which

snow would adhere, ensuring harm.

Bears can push through piles of snow, yet don’t.

They forecast and hibernate while snow falls.

It seems that man alone insists that he must

strive to thumb his nose and try to dance his forty

hour shuffle, weather be damned, inviting heart attacks.

Stock some lanterns

and candles too

stockpiles some food

that’s good for you

then read some books

and stay inside.


© Lawrencealot – February 3, 2015

Ae Freslighe poetry form

Ae Freslighe
An Irish form that dates back to at least the time of Saint Patrick, Ae Freslighe is a quatrain of seven syllables per line, and tells a story within no more than four stanzas. Properly, it rhymes abab cdcd efef etc. All rhymes are feminine rhymes, odd line rhymes ending with words of three syllables and even lines ending with words of two syllables. Ideally, the last word should be the same as the first, although some examples of only the last syllable same are extant. Alternately, when writing more than one stanza, the last line may repeat the first, which would alter the last stanza’s rhyme scheme to eaea.
Please note the syllable count shows that odd lines end in three syllables, even lines in two.
xxxx(xxa) xxxxx(xb) xxxx(xxa) xxxxx(xb)

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My example


Macho Picchu (Ae Freslighe)

Treasures are worth defending;
(it’s best if they’re kept hidden.)
The artisans descending
had done what they were bidden.

The clouds closely hovering –
so full of rain were loaded;
men terraced a covering
that still is not outmoded.

Invaders were defacing
by crude and ugly measures
just taking, not replacing
Thank God they missed these treasures.

© Lawrencealot – October 3, 2014

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Ae Freslighe