Swinburne Quatrain

This form is based upon Algernon Charles Swinburne’s “Faustine”

It is:
Stanzaic, four or more quatrains
Metric: Alternating iambic tetrameter and iambic bimeter
Rhymed abab cbcb dbdb, etc.
Word Refrain: L4 final two-syllable word.

My Example

Celest

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The wranglers and the sheep men came
      to town to rest
and raise some hell and find a dame
      like sweet Celeste.
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They’d play some cards and take a bath
      then do their best
to be the first to trod a path
      unto Celeste.

Most every man thought other girls
      were second best
to looks and legs and raven curls
      of dark Celeste.

And sometimes even married men
      it’s been confessed,
would come to quench a thirsty yen
      for warm Celeste.

Since she could pick and choose each night
no one transgressed
for she’d not tolerate a fight,
petite Celeste.

When men showed class and manners they
      could be the guest
and leave the bar at end of day
        with dear Celeste.

But many others she’d excite
      as night progressed
by sitting on their laps – the light
      and lithe Celeste.

The pastors son, forbidden (though
      he was obsessed)
was never able, that we know,
      to touch Celeste.

He’d watch her walking to the bar-
      his love repressed,
and watch with wonder from afar
      the rare Celeste.

When outlaws came to town and chose
      then to molest
the gals – the preacher’s son arose
      to help Celeste 

The bandits left the preacher’s son
      quite unaddressed
and with a rifle he killed one
      who touched Celeste.

That turned the tide and folks refused
      to be oppressed.
The terror quickly was defused
      for sweet Celeste.

She went to church the Sunday next
      and finely dressed,
and left the townfolk all perplexed,
      did calm Celeste.

She sat next to the boy that day;
      their love progressed.
In autumn the boy moved away
      with his Celeste.

© Lawrencelot – May 9, 2014 

Octain

The Octain is an invented verse form begins and ends the poem with the same word. It was created by Lillian Mathilda Svenson.The defining features of the Octain are:

an octastich, a poem in 8 lines.
syllabic, 2/4/6/8/8/6/4/3 syllables per line.
Not a typo, the last line takes 3 syllables but the last word must be the same as the first.
rhymed or unrhymed. If it is rhymed the rhyme scheme is AbcdbcdA.

Pasted from http://www.poetrymagnumopus.com/index.php?showtopic=1882#baccresiez

My Thanks to Judi Van Gorder for the wonderful resource at PMO

In the rhyme scheme AbcdbcdA, the capital A indicates a word refrain.

My Example

Octawhat? (Octain)

Confused?
A multi-form
with rhyming or without,
was named “Octain”, ain’t that a bitch?
If naming your dog, Dog’s the norm
then I won’t kick about
an octastitch
though confused.

© Lawrencalot – April 3, 2014
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Miniature

  • Miniature is a verse form that is a kind of contradiction of syllabic and metric form. All but 2 lines, begin and end on stressed syllables which would imply catalectic trochaic meter. It also has an unusual feature of requiring the 5th syllable of the 1st line be rhymed with the 1st syllable of the 2nd line, it was created by Margaret Ball Dickson.The Miniature is:
    • a decastich, a poem in 10 lines.
    • syllabic, 7/5/7/5/7/6/7/7/6/7/7 syllables per line. All but L6 & L8 begin and end on a stressed syllable. L6 & L8 have feminine endings.
    • rhyme xaxaxbxbcc, x being unrhymed.
    • composed with the 5th syllable of L1, rhymed with the 1st syllable of L2
My Thanks to Judi Van Gorder for the wonderful resource at PMO
My example poem
Mission Statement    (Miniature)
Mission Statement
Moons unlike the moon of earth
soon will be our fare.
Ships exceeding speed of light
Will propel us there.
Men from earth will colonize
planets fit for living
We’ll find other beings there
giving gifts worth giving.
Know that as our skills increase
So do hopes we’ll spread but peace.
© Lawrencealot – April 3, 2014
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