Created by Andrea Dietrich writing on PoetrySoup in Feb, 2015
It is syllabic, with lines of 11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11
Rhyme Scheme: AabbcbcbbaA
It requires a Refrain: Line 1 is repeated as Line 11.
Generally displayed centered.
Though not directed at you, the shoe may fit. It was, a general bit of wit. It mocked all the selfie crowd all around the cloud. They seem so proud and I know that the well-endowed feel they ought to shed their shroud and flaunt themselves just a little bit. Though not directed at you, the shoe may fit.
The following description is reposted with permission from The Poets Garret, with thanks to Sarah Rayburn.
Created by Sarah Rayburn, the novelinee is a 9 line stanza derived from the Spenserian stanza but written in iambic pentameter or decasyllabic lines. If used as part of a sequence a variation of the closing line should be used as lead line for the next stanza. In the case of a closed novelinee the last stanza would end with a variation of the first line of the first stanza.
Stanza Rhyme Scheme: a. b. a. b. c. d. c..d. d.
Betrayal of Trust
From mists of Avalon she came in white supernova who split my heart in two and left untouched silence in endless night no skyward star to guide my passage through. While drinking wine I gave my love away for whispered promises given out of lust, believing hearts could breathe again today my dreams now lie amid unwanted dust, my heart shattered by betrayals of trust.
Sweet nightingale, unparalleled beauty, my worldly thoughts will drown in idle words, if I did not reflect the love I see, and deny love is nought but food for birds. I dream my arm is loosely round your waist, so I shall hear divinity in your song, and dream upon your eyes with loving haste, to sip from lips of wine where I belong and trust the sweetest breath will keep us strong.
With trust the sweetest breath to keep us strong, my jewel of love to whom I grant my heart, with words and smiles for days that seem so long, so fate has cast the miles to keep apart. In crystal vagaries we’re hand in hand, whilst waterfalls cascade a rhythmic beat, as when we kissed upon the golden sand, below the rugged crags in love’s retreat, our passion found in nature’s dancing feet.
When passion’s found in nature’s dancing feet, above the greenest valleys, smile Black hills, with fragrant flowers dazzling eyes shall meet, where dragonflies commingle by the rills. Your heart in truth a loving paradise, where feelings flow and openly confess, in daring glances tempting looks of ice, for you, my love, are more than words express, I can’t resist your spell of loveliness.
Motherland ~~~ Closed Novelinee
Across the bay where beauty waits for me, beneath the sun-kissed mountain waterfalls, enchanting eyes shall tame the wild and free, my heart is bound by love as Cymru calls. The cloudy blue of railway smoke dissolved against the ageing roofing slates of old, attractions mined before our time evolved, and children chalked their words in letters bold, when mountain streams still flowed with yellow gold.
The mountain streams that flowed with yellow gold, and wrought the wedding bands of royal kings, still whisper love and tales the bards oft told, and magic echoes o’er the valleys and springs. The land where dragons roam and wizards dwell, where singing voices set our fathers free, returning home my heart begins to swell, rejoice my pride in Wales, her mystery, across the bay her beauty stood by me.
This century, the twenty-first, will change forever attitudes that humans share. Relationships shall surely rearrange for we’ll have energy at last, to spare. Our batteries will be charged by the sun and oilfield ownership won’t mean a hoot. The politics of greed shall come undone. We’ll find some other reason for dispute, but gone will be our reason to pollute.
This is a form invented by Susan Budig for a challenge to the readers of The Poetic Asides Blog to create a new form. The Anapeat is based on anaphora, defined by Dictionary.com as ” Rhetoric . repetition of a word or words at the beginning of two or more successive verses, clauses, or sentences. “ The Anapeat repeats a phrase in several places within the poem. The poem consists of five stanzas of five lines each. The repeated phrase/line is the first line of the first stanza, the second line of the second stanzas, etc.
All or part of the phrase is also the title of the poem.
There is no line length, meter, or rhyme requirements, however rhyme and meter may be used if the poet chooses to do so.
American Sentence: Invented by Allen Ginsberg. An American haiku variation. 17 syllables written in a sentence. Any topic. In a series:
James and Basketball James plays basketball with cough and red cheeks activating asthma. Grounded from playground basketball, he sees ball fall through hoop in his mind. He watched beloved Trailblazers on television from his bed. He calls Grandpa to discuss the game as both keep scores, critique players. In his yard the hoop net droops waiting for him to play, to take his shot.
The Lightening Whitening Crone My hairdresser calls my blonde/gray/white hair “dowdy” as she layers hair. To cover thinning bald spots she poofs and puffs my crown which will whiten. When too long, my hair hangs limp and will not turn under; fine strands just fall. No Rogaine or woven weaves, wigs will not work for me, so I endure. I forget about getting haircuts until bangs appear near eyebrows. When grading or writing I like to see the page un-fringed and clearly. My hairdresser knows she will see me when I’m teaching and need light head.
http://www.rainbowcommunications.org/velvet/forms/ My Thanks to Linda Varsell Smith for her contributions above.
So, the qualities of such a sentence? Like most other good poetry it should be Imagistic, with that gap of meaning between the writer and the reader; ie: phenomenology. Some kind of juxtaposition helps create a tension. For example: 1.19 — Get it in your mouth, not sure if you should swallow or not — oyster. 1.24 — The look on RR’s dream face when the army crushes a piano. 2.09 — Steve’s Civil Service motto: Why work for an asshole when you can be one? 3.04 — After I got her email, I pulled the extra pillow from my bed. 4.05 — They want a stool sample, what a load of crap! No Pop, it’s just a smidge. 4.05 — The sign at dairy queen says: New Flamethrower Chicken Now Hiring. 4.08 — Tell Richard I’m laying off women — he says You gonna wear the patch? 4.18 — Each from our respective cars watching her tennis game, the ex- & I. 5.16 — Ma before the Wednesday pillbox — Cholesterol or Tranquilizer? 7.03 — Hour’s wages shot up in three sparkly minutes — Happy Independence Day! 7.04 — Cat corpse on sidewalk, rabbit corpse on the bike trail — Happy Independence Day! 7.26 — I told you I don’t have time on my phone, that’s why I keep hangin’ up on you! 7.31 — Sign of age? She puts on vanilla perfume, I wonder who’s got cake. 8.27 — If you can crawl out your chair to get on her man, you can take a beatin’. 9.07 — That’s an experience I’ve never had he says, nose full of menstrual blood. 9.08 — Good thing I cleaned the kitchen floor shiny target on which the cat could urp. 10.02 — At the spot where my car was totaled, five years later, a traffic circle. 11.05 — Distracted, I can’t get by the cat urp before it becomes a hot lunch. 11.16 — Post Traumatic Stress Disorder at Lowe’s — Rotorwash of ceiling fans. 11.17 — This piece of free-range chicken may be live, would taste better w/ floor dirt. 11.20 — On the beach he skidded to a stop & then someone sucked out his heart. 11.27 — Yesterday doctors gave Dick Cheney shock treatment on the wrong organ. 12.19 — His T-shirt said: Vegetarian is Indian for Bad Hunter. These poems are all from 2007, and we can see several categories. There are cat poems on July 4, September 8, November 5 and on November 17, the poem was written from a cat’s perspective. Found poems are entirely transcribed, or set up in the poem, from January 19, February 9, April 5, July 26, August 27 and December 19. Some poems are from dreams (my daughter Rebecca Rose is often called RR to save a syllable) and some are from relationships. (That has been a rich source of sentences over the past 8 years.) The key comes from a Ginsberg notion, poets are people who notice what they notice. This is a mindfulness exercise and, the more aware you can be, the better the poems. They do reflect the play of the intellect, so a dull mind will create especially dull poems, but at least they’ll be short! In seventeen syllables there is enough room for rhythm and word music. Dig that line, rotor wash of ceiling fans.Dactyllic meter if you’re scoring. You can find other examples above. Avoiding some of the rules of grammar, such as the poem September 8, also add a nice effect and just enough busted syntax so not as to obscure meaning, but be another Ginsberg Mind Writing Slogan,Maximum information, minimum number of syllables. (Condensing.) Ginsberg also comes from the William Carlos Williams school of using demotic speech, so the found sentence of July 26 provides a good example of that, as does use of the word urp.
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Restated specifications: Single line poem of 17 Syllables invented by Allen Ginsberg May be titled or not. May be in series, but USUALLY is not.
Class Act (Form: American Sentence)
Pants hanging below their hips. Gotta be a trick; hidden suspenders?
Englyn unodl crwca, én-glin éen-oddle crewc (crooked short one rhyme englyn) the 4th codified Official Welsh Meter, an Englyn,, is the structural reverse of Englyn unodl union which is far more popular. The englyn unodl crwca is rarely used.
The Englyn unodl crwc is: • stanzaic, written as any number of quatrains, • syllabic, 7-7-10-6 syllable per line. • rhymed, mono rhymed. In L3 the main rhyme is found in the last half of the line followed by caesura and gair cyrch. • composed with “gair cyrch” in L3 (syllables in the last half of a line that follow the main rhyme marked by caesura. The gair cyrch end rhyme is to be echoed or consonated as secondary rhyme in the 1st half of L4. The caesura often appears as a dash.)
x x x x x x A
x x x x x x A
x x x x x x A – x x b
x b x x x A
Kyt ymwnel kywyt, bryt brys,
yn llawen llewych yslys,
lletryt dallon donn ef ai dengys—gud
lliw blaen gruc Generys.
—- Einion Offeiriad 15th century
Upon this Rock by Judi Van Gorder
He chose a simple fisherman,
rock foundation holds God’s plan,
His anointed Sacristan – head of church,
Peter’s perch . . . Vatican.
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Englyn Unodl Crwca Type: Structure, Metrical Requirement, Rhyme Scheme Requirement, Stanzaic Description: (englin eenoddle crewcah) A quatrain with syllable counts: seven, seven, ten, and six and having rhyme and cross-rhyme. Origin: Welsh Schematic: xxxxxxa xxxxxxa xxxxxxaxxb xbxxxa
a = main rhyme. b = subsidiary rhyme that has consonance, assonance, alliteration
Cross rhymes can shift a few positions: a = 7-9 b = 2-4 Rhythm/Stanza Length: 4
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Type: Structure, Metrical Requirement, Rhyme Scheme Requirement Description: Four syllable lines in rhymed couplets. (Cow-idd dye-ire vuhr-yon or cuh’-with day’-air fruh’-yon) It can be true or half-rhyme. Origin: Welsh Schematic: xxxa xxxa Rhythm/Stanza Length: 2
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Convenience Store Theft (Cywydd deuair frion)
Give them some slack They’re young and black It is their right to steal tonight. Forget the facts blame the attacks on white abuse, a fine excuse; they can’t appeal so they must steal.
Cyhydedd fer cuh-hée-dedd ver (short equivalence rhyme), the 14th codified ancient Welsh Meters is a stanzaic Awdl. It is simply couplets in rhymed 8 syllable lines. It is less commonly used by the Welsh who seem to prefer 7 syllable lines. In the ancient poems, these couplets were often multiplied into long stanzas all carrying the same rhyme or employed to present a riddle dyfalu. The is: • written in any number of rhymed couplets. • made up of 8 syllable lines. • rhymed aa bb cc dd etc. x x x x x x x A x x x x x x x A “in many old Welsh poems, a mood is established by a description of the season of the year….”
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Decision Time in Ferguson (Cyhydedd fer)
Excuse me if I hesitate.
I’m white and this town’s filled with hate.
Gun shops this week made a killing.
selling guns to people willing
to be their own line of defense
or punish those who give offense.
Going downtown just for viewing
Seems a very stupid doing.
A mob’s a mob with little thought
of acting the way people ought.
I’ll get ready for Thanksgiving,
and remain among the living.
The Canzonetta or Canzonet and Canzonetta Prime are variations of the Canzone with a more definitive frame. It is a 16th century Italian secular composition often with pastoral, irreverent, or erotic themes.
The Canzonetta or Canzonet is: • at least 2 octaves, made up of 2 quatrains of alternating rhyme. • written with no fixed meter or line length. • composed with a refrain, repeated in L8 of each octave. • rhymed, ababcdcD, efefgdgD. • is called a Canzonetta Prime when the rhyme scheme is ababcbcB dbdbebeB. In this rhyme scheme there is often a repeated rhyme word to strengthen the repetition, but it is not required.
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You Look a Mess (Canzonetta Prime)
If you should choose to go out shopping while wearing curlers in your hair or sporting flip-lops that are flopping Why should anybody care? Appearance is not cause for dramas even in the public square. Although those look like mom’s pajamas apparently you do not care.
The curlers surely have a cause; for whom is it that you prepare? What if you met you own in-laws or little children you might scare? With due concern for other folk, at least you should don leisure wear. Your disrepair looks like a joke apparently you do not care.
Pathways for the Poet by Viola Berg (1977) is a book for and by educators. Classic poetic forms as well as many invented forms which appear to have been invented as teaching tools or exercizes for use in workshops or classrooms are included. Some of these invented forms I have found in use in internet poetry communities, a testament to their staying power. On this page I include the metric invented forms found there in which appear to be exclusive to the community of educators from whom Ms. Berg drew her support. I have yet to find these in any other source. I have included the syllabic invented forms on a separate page. Whether classroom exercise or sharpening your skill as a writer, some of these forms can be fun to play with.
• Arkaham Ballad can be identified by the last line of each stanza being repeated as the first three metric feet of the next stanza. One more invented stanza form appears to be a teaching tool created by Queena Davidson Miller. It is not really a ballad but is suited to relate current events and news articles.
The Arkaham Ballad is: ○ stanzaic, written in any number of cinquains. ○ accentual syllabic, iambic, L1, L3, L4 tetrameter and L2 and L5 trimeter. ○ rhymed, rhyme scheme xabba xcddc xeffe etc. x being unrhymed. ○ composed with L5 repeated as the 1st three metric feet of L1 of the next stanza. ○ suited to current events and the news.
Police Shooting by Judi Van Gorder
They say an unarmed man was shot by cops who’ve run-a-muck. A family man who cut some hair and shaved a face or two. A pair of punks highjacked a truck.
The punks highjacked a truck and he was at the same address, police arrived and shots were fired, the barber hit and soon expired The why of it a guess.
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Conduct Unbecoming (Arkaham Ballad)
Subcultures determine the flow when hate has been accrued. For race and religion involve some problems most hard to resolve. Perhaps mankind is screwed.
Perhaps mankind is screwed my friend, as Ferguson has shown, and Watts before, and Rodney King, and every other racial thing. The hateful seeds are sown.
The hateful seeds are sown by acts that we can justify. We’ll plunder, hurt, and break the laws and disregard, it harms our cause but still won’t satisfy.
This is an invented form created by Mary Boren, aka Meter_Maid on Allpoetry, who hosts a compelling new site called Poets Collective.
It is a poem of 7 lines It is metrical, requiring several specific metrical feet, to wit: L1: A pair of spondees L2-3: Dimetrical dactylic couplet plus a hard beat at the end L4-5: Anapestic dimeter, not rhyming with each other L6: Anapestic trimeter, rhyming with L4 L7: Anapest. amphibrach, or iamb, which may, but is not required to rhyme with L5 It is formulaic, requiring a person’s name in either line 2 or 3. It is themed: ” to capture a person’s unguarded moment, breaking stereotypes.” I’d like to somehow convey that the task is to zoom in on descriptive details that plant a distinct concrete image, preferably an unexpected one. You could almost say it has a volta at L5, as it catches something a camera would miss. It is rhymed with rhyme pattern: xaabzbz, where “z” lines may rhyme or not.
Just Notions (Snapshot)
Think long, think wrong! Lawrence R. Eberhart thought thinking of things he was taught would most surely reveal at least one salient fact he was wrong all along on that deal looking back.